thoughts

looking at the video and thinking it's too dark. also some of the objects that are being filmed might just be making it messier than it has to be. the dark - could be working at some point, fits with the theme but maybe one more tiny bit of filming in some lighter circumstances could make it look more attention grabbing. at some vital points e.g when the we see the eye and then the clock, i'm thinking that i'm only noticing it and thinking -okay, so now she's looking at the clock and has realised it's late and she has to go- but only because we filmed it so obviously know whats going on. to other people it might just look like an eye and then some dolls and oh a clock kinda thing. so. think we've done a pretty good job however can be bettered. but tiiime is running away.