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I really like the hand held filming in this opening, especially when the girl throws the leaves in the air. I like the mystery as to who the girl is and what happened to her. The black and white setting works really well, and the framing and 'REC' on the footage looks really effective. I like the sound at the begining of the breathing and rustling and think the music works well.
This would be a good idea for our opening scene.
Overall however there are quite a lot of bad points about this opening. I dont like the editing in some bits and think most of it is a bit ruffly put together and random.
I like it though and it is good inspiration for our thriller opening.